Kayaker – shark encounter. YIKE! It bit his paddle! What if he had lost the paddle? There are no sharks where I kayak. I like it that way.
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Kayak Reading: No Regrets, Sunspot Literary Journal
I returned to Devil’s Kitchen Lake for another kayak reading. I do have other lakes to show you guys, but Devil’s Kitchen is close, convenient and pretty.
A couple bobbles as I turned the page and also bumped into the bluff.
This story, as with many of my stories, began in a Meg Pokrass workshop.
Kayak Reading: Way Down Deep Inside
I always look forward to the Devils Kitchen Literary Festival, hosted by Southern Illinois University Carbondale undergraduate creative writing students. Since I live near the Devils Kitchen Lake for which the festival is named, I decided to go take an early evening paddle and do my own wee Devils Kitchen reading.
The lake is a dammed river, as many lakes in So Ill are. This one is narrow and wind-y, just begging me to keep on going around the next bend and the next and the next one too. I try to remember that as far out as I paddle, I have that same distance to return.
Drowned trees are a big feature on this lake. I suspect if I worked at it a little bit, it wouldn’t be impossible to get some eerie images.
But nothing eerie today. Just me reading a story from The Slag Review, “Way Down Deep Inside.”
Wicked Annabella
Here’s my song for the day — The Kinks, Wicked Annabella
The Best Horse in the World
This won’t be the last time I talk about Merlin here. I have a blog about him over at Ghost Parachute, a really cool literary journal that is just getting better and better.
★★★★★
I posted on Facebook recently how I don’t write reviews because I write them so badly. It’s true. When I write a review, inevitably I sound dumb as a box of rocks, or pedantic, or deranged. Not a good look. And, as a writer trying to advance in my craft, not the kind of writing I want to acknowledge!
So I’ve been reading more reviews and also blurbs, and I’ve come to realize that one skill I must improve is careful reading.
I think I’m already a pretty good reader. I’ve been doing it since before kindergarten and I have a lot of practice. But it’s easy to read too quickly, to gulp rather than sip. I find that when I read something once – a novel, let’s say – I’m caught up in the plot, falling in love or distrust with the characters, and sure, I’m also admiring individual sentences and scenes, noting that bit of foreshadowing or how that detail builds the character’s profile. But it’s on the second reading where I focus on craft.
That’s one great thing about flash – it’s easy to re-read three times in a row. Four times, even. And good flash stories beg to be re-read. They are like saffron – each ounce is worth a pound of something else, not the least because of the labor involved.
I write a lot. My day job is writing. I try to keep up a reasonable flow of flash writing and blog writing, and I swear I really am going to write that dang novel. But I need to write even more. I need to learn to write reviews. And maybe some day, blurbs.
I like to let writers (or musicians or other artists) know when I’m moved by or admire something they’ve produced. And, reviews are an important part of marketing for a writer. I’m annoyed I’ve let myself go so long with such shoddy review-writing skills.
I vow to do better.
Hero for the Week – Vancouver Flash Fiction
Vancouver Flash Fiction is a resource hub for flash fiction writers, and also a critique circle for flash fiction writers in the Vancouver (British Columbia) area.
Here’s VFF’s definition of flash fiction: Brief condensed stories written in under 1,000 words, usually closer to 500, with a complete arc – beginning/middle/end – infused with sumptuous imagery, metaphor, and intentional word choice, some level of change/transformation, emotional resonance, and unexpected twists and turns towards an aha, ha, or ahhh ending… in a nutshell.
We could talk about each section of that definition over a bottle of wine. Instead I’ll swirl what’s in my glass and say that “towards an aha, ha, or ahhh ending…” is hitting me just the right way right now. One of the things I most love about flash is how hard the best stories clobber – and, after you’ve had your “aha, ha or ahhh” moment, you can read it again, twice even, to savor each word.
But back to Vancouver. Weekly features include: Killer First Sentences, Flash Fiction Writing Tips (many of which pack the same power as a flash story), MustRead Flash Fiction Collections & Anthologies and Flash Craft. Also, check out the links to Flash Fiction Workshops and journals open to submissions.
And it’s all free. Like ‘em on Facebook.
And say hi to flash fiction writer Karen Schauber – she organizes the page.
What I’m listening to today
Danger Mouse, Daniele Luppi performing Black, featuring Norah Jones. From the album called Rome.
Not even sure where I first encountered this song. Unforgettable melody, great voice (duh), mysterious/melancholic lyrics. Love.
What are you listening to today?
Help me, I love Jaws, I mean Moby Dick, I mean Jaws
In my dreams about animals, which are many, sharks are common, appear when I’m stressed, are never kind, and are the only animals that talk to me in English. In the first shark dream I remember, I tried to evade the shark by swimming under a shipwreck; the shark said, “I’m going to get you;” I said, “Oh no you aren’t!” and then I was stuck under the shipwreck until I awoke. So, it’s not like the conversations are philosophical, but I can’t recall any other animal using people-speak to communicate.
Anyway.
I’m not the first to notice the irony of beaches open for the Fourth of July during corona-tine AND as a plot point in Jaws.
But here’s a pretty fantastic article that appeared in the outstanding cultural website Crime Reads.
On the Endless Symbolism of Jaws, Which Owes Its Dark Soul to Moby Dick